[Smoogles]

I'll start with this: This is a blog entry I made not so long ago about relationships.

HEADLINE
Plan B falls flat on Plan A's Face, they both choke and die.

BODY
So direct doesn't work, timid doesn't work. Just being me doesn't work. Being honest and open, throw that out of the window too.

So how do I get into another relationship?

Only took 30+ years for the first one, I might have a chance again in about 30+ years time, might as well come back after 2040 to the human race, try my luck then.

So many of us by the way side, and there's no hand to pull us back. Burning cars along the route, labelled "You don't do 'it' for me", "Beautiful people are not what I'm after", "I feel I don't deserve", "I can't love you", "You deserve someone better than me".

Lots like those, duplicates all over the war zone that my past seems to resemble. Craters, smoke, desertion, emptiness, and roaming, listless.

Oh look, here's a new wreck. Shame, it was a beauty. Look there's still some text printed on it 'Unworthy...'. Another casualty of the war with self, and it's littering my meadow. I just want the little deaths to stop. I try planting trees, but someone steps on them, crushing, destroying. That was going to be such a nice tree, tall, and happy with it's existence, unlike a lot of empty shells.

Perhaps I should pray? Which god/ess, supreme deitific entity/pantheon do I choose?

A small god comes yonder. Small and unassuming, carrying a placard that reads 'Plan C'.

Time to hit the road. I must be close to the edge of this zone. I think I should leave if given the chance, and bid farewell to these placard bearing entities.

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Someone once said I should write poetry rather than short stories.. but I still think I should stick to art.

[URSwhizkid09]

I really like that especially the part where you talk about how you "planted trees but they got stepped on".
The poll confused me though.

[Smoogles]

Thankyou. I think I was kindof loosing my mind when I got to the poll bit. lol

[TinGirl]

Anything from the heart can be moving, whether it's an image ,a poem or some music, they all have an effect on those around us.

[URSwhizkid09]

Wrote what I think is an excellent short story but it's 10 pages so I can't post it here.

If anyone wants to read let me know and I'll e-mail it to you.

I really want some outside feedback.